

“After nourishment, shelter, and companionship, stories are the thing we need most in the world.”
― Sir Philip Pullman, author of His Dark Materials trilogy
Welcome to The Meticulous Manuscript — a place for all your storytelling needs, where your creative vision is strengthened, your way.
If you need developmental editing, a manuscript assessment, or a first chapter critique, I offer quality services that will help bring your story to life. Whether you are an emerging writer working on your first manuscript or an established author seeking a polished version of your latest book, I provide editorial services designed to meet your specific needs at an affordable price.
My editorial philosophy is to help you, the author, strengthen your story by refining your voice and unique storytelling ability to create something truly impactful. I edit both fiction, such as novels, short stories, and picture books, and creative non-fiction, such as memoirs and personal essays.
I believe the best editors ask questions and offer feedback that encourage and invite a conversation with the author. The author-editor relationship is one to be cherished, and I cannot wait to work with you on fulfilling your writing dreams.
Are you ready to begin your editing journey with me?
SERVICES
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Developmental Editing
Developmental/structural editing comprehensively evaluates the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript and examines the development of your story. Feedback is given in the form of a detailed editorial report – 3,000 words or more – and in-text comments within the manuscript.
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Short Story Developmental Editing
A short story developmental edit functions exactly the same as a full developmental edit, only it is tailored to suit short stories.
Feedback is given in the form of a detailed editorial report – under 3,000 words – and in-text line edits within your manuscript where I will address issues on a scene-by-scene basis.
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First Chapter Critique
A first chapter critique assesses the opening pages of your manuscript – whether it be fiction or creative non-fiction – to determine how effectively they hook the reader and and set up the story.
Feedback is given in the form of an editorial report – 2,000 words or under – and in-text line edits within your manuscript where I will address issues on a scene-by-scene basis.
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Picture Book Developmental Editing
Picture book developmental editing functions exactly the same as a full developmental edit, only it is tailored to suit picture books. I am particularly interested in seeing how your story unfolds across 24, 32, or 40 pages, which are the industry standard lengths for picture books.
Feedback is given in the form of an editorial report – 2,000 words or under – and in-text line edits within your manuscript where I will address issues on a scene-by-scene basis.
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